Nice animation, inconsistent music.
I thought the animation and story were fine, perhaps a bit rushed. What compounds that feeling though is the fact that the music jumps around too much. The choices were appropriate, but if you had stuck to just one song the whole way through (the first interruption with the door worked well though, as an exception) it would've turned out better. Music tends to make or break music for me personally so that's why I felt that. Keep at it though. :)